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You couldn't believe what you are seeing.

Is Gilbert talking to Elizaveta?


Woah. Slow down. Breath. Organize your thoughts. Probably you are still in Math class, dozing off, waiting for your Math teacher to scold you awake from this nightmare. You pinch yourself to confirm it.

But it didn't work. Gilbert Beilschmidt is STILL talking to Elizaveta Hedervary, which is your WORST nightmare.


Why, you ask?
That bird-loving, Prussian (Not German, I tell you) albino is your best friend and that super-hot, Hungarian girl right there is what he calls his "former" crush. You see, she was his crush since first grade, but it faded away (much to your relief) when *cough* Roderich *cough* came. But then the two separated (No, she did not dump him, it seems to harsh for poor little Beethoven-fanboy) which made you worried.

Why would you care? Because your best friend IS your crush. He's the most awesome guy you've ever met! I mean, your best friend is an albino with a world-sized ego! Sure, the ego stuff is completely a turn-off, but who cares anyway?!

OMG. He's talking to her. HE'S TALKING TO HER. Maybe he'll ask her out, and then she agrees, then they'll become boyfriend and girlfriend, then maybe they'll get married and have albino kids! O-Or she'll act like a tsundere whack him with a frying pan then apologize to his house then... Oh France knows! these thoughts race across your mind. But one thing's for sure: You can't let any romance happen between the two. No way.


You snapped out of it. THOSE TWO ARE STILL TALKING WITH EACH OTHER. What the hell do you do to even pull these two apart?!

Wait a second... Is Gilbert... Blushing?! He's blushing. He's blushing. HE'S BLUSHING. You've never seen him blush like that before. MEIN GOTT THE IMPOSSIBLE HAS HAPPENED. IT MUST BE THE END.



Suddenly, the most stupid idea hit you like a meteor hitting some random planet far away. You are determined to separate them once and for all, even if it means Gilbert murdering you tonight. No regrets, anyways.

You approach the two, who are still busy with their discussion. Summoning all your courage and humor, these words escaped your mouth:

"Hey boyfriend! I didn't see you in the lobby today so I thought you'd be here! Anyways, thanks for the flowers! I love you!"


Gilbert's face turned red, his eyes widening at you. Elizaveta has the same reaction (without the red face). A pair of crimson red and green orbs stared right to your soul. Any second now... That frying pan should come right across his face...


But what you get is an unexpected reaction from her.
Was she... Laughing?!

Yes, yes she was.

Did you just say something wrong?! Tone of voice to shaky? Too obvious? Did you stammer? WHY IS SHE LAUGHING FOR FLYING MINT BUNNY'S SAKE~!!!

"Oh... Prussia," she stopped laughing. That frying pan is coming up for sure!

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"You and your crush are already together! And here you are-- asking advice on how to ask her out? LAAAME~"

Took you four minutes and 25 seconds to figure out what's happening.
EXTENDED NOOBISH ENDING:

"Do you still remember that moment, Gil?" you said sweetly, facing him.
"Heck yeah liebling (darling)," Gilbert smirked, putting his arms over your shoulder, "You were really shameless back then. Maybe because I am so awesome."

You let out a quiet giggle.

"Ich liebe dich, [name]."
"I love you too, Gilbert."

"Oh yeah, we should call our son Gilbert Jr.! That way, he'll be as awesome as me!" he proclaimed.
"Um... sure," you chuckled, "But what if it's a girl?"

You could see him ponder deeply.

"How about Julia or Maria?" he said.

You nodded as rested on his shoulder, clutching your round tummy as you feel a little kick inside. You just can't wait.

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THAT. WAS. SO. SHORT. OTL


Reader-chan, why you so nervous?! Can't you see Gilbert loves you back?!

I couldn't think of a better title, so yeah. This is based on a little chain message a received a while ago, so I figured out I could make use of it..

It was supposed to be England and Seychelles, but I figured out it would be best with Prussia and Hungary (even though if I love PruHun).

I'm really bad at translating, but the girl (which Hungary represents) says something like this:
"Oh, Kayo na pala ng crush mo. Bakit nanghihingi ka pa ng advice?"

Which roughly translates as:

"Oh, you and your crush are together already. Why are you asking for advice?"

But it seems too nice for Hungary (well at least in my POV) to say something like that to Prussia. :P

Stone me now for my horrible and short fic. orz

EDIT:

I gotta give it to :iconsushi-cutie: for her suggestion regarding this story. Thank you very much!
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:iconartblast-5:
artblast-5 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
I laughed so hard more than I should XD
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:iconpffcandyspeedwings:
PFFCandySpeedwings Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I-I'm not nervous!
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:iconcloudy-skyes:
cloudy-skyes Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student General Artist
#PLOTTWIST
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:iconmmorpgwizard:
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Dude, the first three five sentences completely summarize your worst fears in school.

You couldn't believe what you are seeing.
Is Gilbert talking to Elizaveta?
Woah.
Slow down
Breathe.

#WheneverYouSeeYourCrushWithAnotherGirlImmeadiatelyFlipOutAndGoCryInACorner
That's the rule of life for me.
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
YES! SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS ME!! But now he became a douchey-face so I don't talk to him anymore...
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:iconmmorpgwizard:
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
...Who?
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
My old crush but he's douchey now so FAHK HIM!
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:iconmmorpgwizard:
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
My old crush is a total douche... That bastard...
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
Crushes.....THEY SUCK BALLS! Anais Icon: No 
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:iconmmorpgwizard:
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Indeed they do.
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
Yeah... They make me do this: Kobeni Confused Icon 
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:iconigame101:
IGame101 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im laughing so hard omg
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ItaDei715 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, the period part :P
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:iconerinkirland-mulby:
erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I would have known 4 hours and 35 seconds later, while I was sitting in front of the TV watching Sherlock.
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:iconlullabyly:
lullabyly Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student General Artist
awww
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:iconlousiey:
Lousiey Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello my watcher funny I saw you here
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:iconlullabyly:
lullabyly Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student General Artist
HELLoooOooo!!!! ^^:heart:
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:iconlousiey:
Lousiey Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How at you friend?
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:icone-sane:
E-Sane Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I should have known three minutes and twenty-five seconds earlier.
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xChocolate-san Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, what a cute story. >//u//< altho in real life i would never ever have the guts to say that

and then when I saw that tagalog sentence: 😃
^u^ sucks that I can't really speak it.
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VOCLAOID-Magnet Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hah. Nice. XD

Oh~ Look at that! XD A Tagalog sentence. Are you a Filipino or something? XD
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ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, yes I am!
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:iconvoclaoid-magnet:
VOCLAOID-Magnet Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
High-five!
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:iconthisisajfm:
ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Apir!
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:iconvoclaoid-magnet:
VOCLAOID-Magnet Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woot!
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keyoflove Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013

Amazing :D

 

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:iconmochiface:
MochiFace Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Isn't that a Filipino translation?
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:iconthisisajfm:
ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, Yes it is.
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:iconmochiface:
MochiFace Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Oh....why did you put that there?
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:iconthisisajfm:
ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because it's the original text. It's from a chain message ^^
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MochiFace Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Now I get it thank you! I can only see that it is in Tagalog since there is a 'Bakit' I'm still learning! Would you perhaps know the Filipino translation of 'crush'? Thank you 8D
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ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'Crush?' Hehe, I don't really think there's a Tagalog translation... Maybe it's because I'm not really Tagalog... *scoots away*
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mangaanimefanforlife Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol the ending was golden i can't stop laughing lol
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xXTomoDachiXx Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOL sooo embarrassing XDD nice job though! I love it :)
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LilNineTails Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This has me written all over it. = u =; Idiotic antics and all.
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ToshikoYoshikuni Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If it's a girl, call her Gilberta. //shot
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marchrrr Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Gilberta.omG
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:iconthisisajfm:
ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That'll be awesome.
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109144 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG LMAO.XD I FEEL KINDA STUPID.O.O
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AleItaly1998 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

reading the first part,when I see they talk and I was like"ok,I'm going to faint,i am going to faint,i am going to faint and drowen in my own tears right here...."Tears of Joy APH: Onion France 

then I read the final" shitFace Palm Austria Free icon what the fruk i did....ok,I am dead for to much joy.."APH: onion austria 

* shaking pom-pom everywhereCheerleader  and singing"YEESS YESS YESS YESS YESS YOU GO WRITER-CHAN,YOU GO WRITER-CHAN!YESSSSSSS!" like an diot*

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ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I have my own cheering squad :D
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HetaliaLover379 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Hahahahaha omg this is sooo me! Love it! XD
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PastaLovingFanGirl11 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013

OMG! You know Tagalog?! Wait... Does that mean you're Filipino?! If you are.... ME TOO! YAY! I'm so happy~! :D

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ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I am Filipino, but not a native Tagalog speaker. I‘m Bisaya (or Cebuano, whatever you call it) ang I'm constantly failing in Filipino... But I‘m still Pinoy so yeah!!
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PastaLovingFanGirl11 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
OMG! I'm so happy~! :D
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allieallred Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hungary mad prussia blush!!!!!!!! the fruk *finds ninja assasians to take care of her *finishes reading the story* abort mission ABORT!!!lol
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Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What the heck is with all the blank space?
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:iconthisisajfm:
ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Come to think of it... I don't know exactly. I think I was deciding how Hungary should say it err something...
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:iconsushi-cutie:
Sushi-Cutie Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You shouldn't post it blank, y'know. Or at least post 'Unfinished' on it. XD
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:iconthisisajfm:
ThisIsAJfM Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Umm... there is an ending...?
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